NZ Chocolate
The awesome but greedy Easter BunnyWho: The Easter bunny is a bunny that bring delicious chocolate eggs and chocolate bunny’s to your house and put them in your room in the basket at the end of your bed so when you wake up you can eat all of the mouth watering chocolate.
What: He brings lovely chocolate to your house in a creamy rock n roll car. When: On the Wonderful but delightful SUNDAY 16TH !!!!
Were: He brings yummy yummy Easter eggs to your house then goes to snooze in is delicious look house covered in real Easter eggs
Why: Because he has nothing better to do and he just wants to make people happy not all sad
How: How he gets around he rides on his magical chocolate carrot car they go all over the world together
Hi it is Chloe your story is really good and nice but at the end it needs a full stop. bye from Chloe n
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Hi Sophie, I think your story is full of describing words and I like how you explained it very well. You need a full stop at the end but your story was still great!
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