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Thursday, 18 August 2016

Beamaholic gymnast



Hello this is a poem and its about the Rio Olympics 2016. It has one simile in it and I chose this photo because she is very wonderful at gymnastics. What did you like about my poem? Comment down below

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  2. hello I liked how you discrived your post it also awesome how you write it your probley the best at writing in our class next time maby add some colour to your work

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    1. Ok I will add more color next time

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    2. Ok I will add more color next time

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  3. Really good writing and keep up the good work, I really like how you used similes

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